The short answer
This commercial real estate script reaches owners and tenants with facts, not flattery. The opener names the building and a verifiable fact, discovery covers hold plans, lease dates and financing pressure, six objection responses handle incumbent brokers and valuation skepticism, and the close books a property walk or sends comps with a date attached.
The script
Sample talk track. Fictional names. Adapt it to your offer and your rules.- Rep
Hi, am I speaking with the owner of [building address]? This is [name] with [firm], a commercial brokerage here in [market]. I will be direct: I noticed your building's [tax assessment / prior listing / tenancy change], and I had a question about it. Do you have 30 seconds?
- Prospect
Sure.
- Rep
We just placed a [asset type] two blocks away at [price per foot], and your building's basis makes me curious about your plans. Is this a long-term hold for you, or would a number make you think about it?
- Prospect
Long-term, mostly.
- Rep
Good to know, and that changes the conversation from a sale to the rent roll. How is occupancy, and are any of the leases rolling in the next year?
- Prospect
Pretty full, one space opens in June.
- Rep
Then June is your event, not a sale. Two things I can do that cost nothing: I can send you what comparable space is asking and getting per foot right now, so your June asking rent is grounded in fact instead of a guess. And if you want, a 15 minute walk of the space with a fresh set of eyes on what tenants in this market are asking for. Comps, walk, or both?
- Prospect
Send the comps.
- Rep
Done today. And the walk: no obligation, I walk the space, you get my read on leasing it before June. Worth 15 minutes in the next two weeks, or should the comps be enough for now?
- Prospect
Take a look if you're in the area.
- Rep
I will set it up for next week and confirm by email. The comps hit your inbox this afternoon from my address. If a buyer ever comes at your number, you will hear it from me first, whether we represent each other or not. Thanks for the time.
Facts are the pitch
Commercial owners and tenants receive broker calls the way traders receive cold pitches: constantly, and with a finger on the hang-up. The only opener that survives is a verifiable fact about the asset itself: the assessment moved, the prior listing expired, a tenant left, a comp traded two blocks away. This script is built on that discipline. Every claim is checkable, every offer is data-first, and the walk is offered as a service rather than demanded as a meeting.
The category is also business-to-business end to end, which changes the legal frame: per the FTC’s guidance, the TSR’s National DNC Registry provisions do not cover business-to-business calls unless they involve retail sales of nondurable office or cleaning supplies. That is not a blank check; state telemarketing statutes can still apply, and recording consent has no B2B exemption anywhere the broker dials.
The structure
The fact opener. Owner confirmation, firm name, one verifiable observation about the building, and a 30-second ask. The observation must be real; the broker who shades a fact to open a call has already lost the principal.
The hold-plan question. Long-term hold, or would a number make them think. The answer routes everything: a hold conversation goes to the rent roll and the June lease; a sale conversation goes to valuation and timing.
Occupancy and roll dates. The lease roll is the owner’s real calendar. A space opening in June is an event the broker can serve today, with comps and a walk, without any sale pressure.
The two offers. Comparable data with a date, and a 15 minute walk of the space with a fresh read. Both are free, both are useful to a hold owner, and both build the relationship the listing eventually comes from.
The long-game close. The comps go out today; the walk is scheduled around the owner’s week; and the broker’s standing offer, you hear from me first when a buyer circulates, is stated plainly because it is true.
Objection handling
“I have a broker”
“Good, most serious owners do. Then take the comps and hand them to your broker; better inputs make them better at their job. If your broker ever wants the sale sheet from the building two blocks away, I will send it to them directly.” Loyalty respected, data delivered, and the incumbent now knows your name as the broker who helped. Incumbents change; helpfulness persists in the file.
“I’m not selling at any price”
“I am not asking you to sell; a long hold is exactly why the rent roll matters. The comps tell you what your June space should ask, and the walk tells you what tenants expect now. Both make the hold worth more.” Reframing from sale to leasing converts the no-seller into a client of a different service.
“Send me your info first”
“I will send the comps today, which is the info that matters, and the walk is how you judge me: 15 minutes, my read on the space, no listing agreement in the room. If the read is useful, we keep talking; if not, the comps were still worth the email.” Info as artifact of a walk, never as replacement.
“How did you get my number?”
“Public ownership records for the building; your entity’s registered contact.” Answer precisely. Commercial owners verify provenance in minutes through their attorneys, and an invented answer ends the relationship and invites a complaint.
“I got three calls like this this week”
“Then let me be the one that was useful: the comp I mentioned is real and it prices your street, and I will send it regardless of what you decide about me. Judge the data, not the dial.” Volume complaints are won by specificity, not apology theater.
“Your comps are wrong”
“Could be; show me which ones and I will pull the actual leases. My read is only as good as the data, which is why I send it before I ask for anything.” Valuation humility is a positioning tool in this category: the broker who concedes a bad comp is the broker whose next comp gets believed.
Gatekeeper line
Property managers and receptionists route these calls, and the ownership question gets through: “This is [name] with [firm] about [building]; are you the owner’s contact, or is ownership direct?” Get the name and title of whoever handles ownership decisions, thank the desk, and never pitch the asset to someone who cannot sell it. The desk remembers brokers who asked for the right person.
Voicemail, 20 seconds
“[Name], [name] with [firm] about [building]. We placed the [asset type] two blocks away at [price per foot], and I have comps that price your June space. Sending them today; if you want a 15 minute walk with a fresh read, I am at [number].” Facts, offer, number. Log it and rotate daypart on the next attempt.
After the call
The AI summary should carry the asset fact used, hold plan, occupancy, roll dates, the offers accepted, and the loyalty flag. Dispositions match the trade: owner interested with meeting set, tenant expansion noted, wants comps or market data, other broker of record, not now with next-year follow-up, do not call permanently, wrong contact or company moved. The comps email goes out the same day; in this category the deliverable is the credibility, and a same-day comp sheet with real leases is the best business card a broker owns.
Compliance in one paragraph
Business-to-business calls are outside several FTC TSR provisions, including the National DNC Registry requirement, per the FTC’s guidance, but that is not a blank check: state telemarketing statutes can still apply, and many brokers keep 8 a.m. to 9 p.m. local hours as internal policy because principals answer cells at home, mirroring the 16 CFR 310.4(c) window. Confirm the called party’s time zone before a block that crosses the country. Recording consent has no B2B exemption: Washington (RCW 9.73.030) and California (Penal Code 632) require all parties to consent to a recorded call. Keep an internal do-not-call list so a never-call-me from a principal is honored even where the National Registry does not apply. DialBreeze enforces your internal DNC list, quiet hours and attempt caps. This guide describes rules, not legal advice.
FAQ
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Sources
- ftc.gov /business-guidance/resources/complying-telemarketing-sales-rule
- ecfr.gov /current/title-16/chapter-I/subchapter-C/part-310/section-310.4
- app.leg.wa.gov /rcw/default.aspx?cite=9.73.030
- leginfo.legislature.ca.gov /faces/codes_displaySection.xhtml?sectionNum=632.&lawCode=PEN
Operational guidance, not legal advice. Rules vary by state and by campaign.